20 February, 2014 at 4:26 pm
Sam, it looks like you put a lot of work into creating, editing, and performing for you video. Great work – very creative. I’d like to see you develop your argument more fully, though. Your film is actually a bit short (1:57 of content), so feel free to expand.
Where’s you source analysis? I also don’t see any citations in your script. Without these, there isn’t actually any evidence of your investigating skills. Please be sure to read the assignment requirements carefully.
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